Critique

This photo essay is a first person documentary.

About 42 pictures.

3 min and 5 sec.

This photo had no impact on me because these people deserve to be
where they are and so no matter what happens, I will not have any
sympathy for them.

Topics

Hollly's Mom.
Holly's Cat.
Frisby players
School life
Thug life
Gangtas paradise
Emo people
Football people
***Cafeteria Food***

Good White Space

This photo lacks an eyeline.

Good Art

This photo also doesn't have an eyeline.

Good Pictures

Good Text

No eyeline.

The Introspective Photographer -- Austin Construction

The First Person Documentary -- Hannah

The Narrated Documentary -- Spring Break