Critique

This photo essay is a first person documentary.

About 42 pictures.

3 min and 5 sec.

This photo had no impact on me because these people deserve to be
where they are and so no matter what happens, I will not have any
sympathy for them.

Topics

Hollly's Mom.
Holly's Cat.
Frisby players
School life
Thug life
Gangtas paradise
Emo people
Football people
***Cafeteria Food***

Good White Space

This photo lacks an eyeline.

Good Art

This photo also doesn't have an eyeline.

Good Pictures

Good Text

No eyeline.

The Introspective Photographer -- Austin Construction

The First Person Documentary -- Hannah

The Narrated Documentary -- Spring Break

Photo Illustration

Details -- These bricks are everywhere in the school and it's what makes the school. I captured a close up of a few bricks and you can see the grains in it.












Light -- There are many windows in this school where light comes in. This is a good example of where the light shines through the windows.












Patterns -- The tiles on the floor make an interesting design.












Angles -- There are many different views of the lower floor around this school. In the upstairs hallways there are a lot of places to look down below.



















Surroundings -- The green trees look nice in this school and make it look better. These trees are in the corner of the building and would be a pretty boring place if it weren't for the trees.

Architecture

Scenery:

The scenery goes well with the building.

Pattern:

The tiles in the floor make a pattern.

Angle:

This picture is of the corner of this staircase.

Light:

The light is shining through the windows.

Details:

This is an example of Details because it is shot really close.